5 word challenge
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5 word challenge: light, smoke, pillow, whipped, chat
Public Note added by liz on 06/11/2008I rolled over, my back facing the window. I wasn’t ready to face the light yet, I just wanted the night to last a little longer. But, I needed to get to my day. As I stood up, my hair fell onto my face and I could smell the smoke and beer from last night. I stood up and threw my clothes on the ...
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light, smoke, pillow, whipped, chat
Public Note added by Appie Verschoor on 06/06/2008The chat went on for hours right now, he knew she would be sitting in a dark room with only the light of her screen to reavel her hands. The words popped in his window, he smurked and his fingers were babbling away already. Smoke filled his sunlit room, his eyes looked hollow he hadn't slept for ...
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5 word challenge: light, smoke, pillow, whipped, chat
Public Note added by Kevin Rickis on 05/24/2008The light in the room was dim but the bright lights of the stage made her lion costume uncomfortable. The singer dressed as a ring master whipped at her rump as she passed, occasionally making real contact which the audience enjoyed and thought part of the act, even though they thought ...
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5 word challenge: light, smoke, pillow, whipped, chat
Public Note added by Irma Vermaat on 05/22/2008The light was dimmed, he sat down to smoke a cigarette. He was thinking about the chat he had earlier on with that strange woman. She was a fascinating creature yet slightly frightening. They had been chatting for several weeks now and he would love to meet her in real life. Unfortunately this ...
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Train x 5 (poem, doggerel)
Public Note added by Martha Tidville on 05/21/2008The bride's in her dress, in her room, on a chair; Thinks, "might train a kiss-curl into my hair..." Her thought train is stopped by the noisy refrain Of the Best Man abusing her dog on the stair: "Some people house train their pets," he declares To the crapulous creature, and kicks it, and swears. ...
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Train x 5
Public Note added by maiki interi on 05/20/2008The conductress punched the train ticket, leaving behind the hole of a squared-bell shape. I attributed the thrills that went down my spine to her movement, her body leaning close to mine. There was something about the shape of her uniform that appealed to me, and for a brief moment I wondered ...
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headphone, thrills, flower, china, mirror
Public Note added by Martha Tidville on 05/11/2008[POEM.] Girl from China; Headphone, webcam: Leagues and oceans forgotten. Her face my mirror, Feeling words, speaking thrills; Her body a flower, opening.
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headphone, thrills, flower, china, mirror
I woke with a ringing in my ears giving me cause once more to rue the day I opted to have a headphone installed. It was my agent, Thrills Malone, "How goes?" I greeted him. "Just going with the flow ..er, why do you ask, you know something I don't?" ...ever the paranoid one, though this ...
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5 word challenge: headphone, thrills, flower, china, mirror
Public Note added by Kevin Rickis on 05/11/2008The music on her headphone bored her after a year on repeat. She wanted to experience the thrills of smelling a flower to taste tea from a china cup or even see her face in a mirror, this coma sucked.
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headphone, thrills, flower, china, mirror
Public Note added by Al Wood on 05/11/2008The mirror site in China crashing meant that the flower of the country's youth were unable to get their usual quota of cheap thrills on the web however much they strained to listen on their headphone.
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