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: The music on her headphone bored her after a year on repeat. She wanted to experience the thrills of smelling a flower to taste tea from a china cup or even see her face in a mirror, this coma sucked.

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- Irma Vermaat
  
  19 months ago
  
  Another one sentence entry :-) I like the twist on the end !
  
  Another one sentence entry :-) I like the twist on the end !
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- Al Wood
  
  19 months ago
  
  Actually, 2 sentences, but the coma is a nice twist, agreed.
  
  Actually, 2 sentences, but the coma is a nice twist, agreed.
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  - Irma Vermaat
    
    19 months ago
    
    Woops. I really should pay more attention.
    
    Woops. I really should pay more attention.
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    - Kevin Rickis
      
      19 months ago
      
      Woops sorry didn't read the rules right :)
      
      Woops sorry didn't read the rules right :)
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      - Kevin Rickis
        
        19 months ago
        
        No I am just confusing myself, there is no one sentence rule, sorry I will go and cause chaos elsewhere for a bit.
        
        No I am just confusing myself, there is no one sentence rule, sorry I will go and cause chaos elsewhere for a bit.
        
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        Irma Vermaat
        
        19 months ago
        
        I'm afraid I started this confusion. It's one of my talents, hehe ...
        
        I'm afraid I started this confusion. It's one of my talents, hehe ...
        
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- Martha Tidville
  
  19 months ago
  
  Heh, and by the way, I enjoyed your piece and thought it was clever. (See? I do social skills too, occasionally.)
  
  Heh, and by the way, I enjoyed your piece and thought it was clever. (See? I do social skills too, occasionally.)
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- Martha Tidville
  
  19 months ago
  
  You could change the first full stop to a colon in order to make it into one valid sentence. :)
  
  Technically, I'd change the final comma to a semicolon as well, but that's because I am a punctuation nazi undergoing treatment for control freakery.
  
  You could change the first full stop to a colon in order to make it into one valid sentence. :) <br /><br />Technically, I'd change the final comma to a semicolon as well, but that's because I am a punctuation nazi undergoing treatment for control freakery.
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